第一篇:初中英语作文入门叙事篇
初中英语作文入门
叙事篇
go for a walk
yesterday evening, i went out for a walk with my mother. on the road,we met a foreigner. he asked me the way to the hot spring hotel. i told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left,then he could see the hotel. he thanked me very much for my help. i was happy that i could help him.
to visit
it was fine last sunday. we went to visit a modern car factory. it was eight o’clock when we arrived there by bus. pingping’s uncle who was an engineer there showed us around the factory. first we followed him to some workshops,and then he told us something about the different kinds of cars. after hearing what he said,we all knew the cars they produced were both cheap and beautiful. what’s more,they are very popular with people.
summer holidays
summer holidays are coming. during the holidays,the first thing i do is to get relaxed. i’ll do morning exercises every day as i did at school. and in the afternoon,if i’m free,i will go
fishing in the park. i like reading.so i’d like to spend some time reading books. i will also try to study maths,for i’m not good enough at it. during the holidays, i’ll help my parents do housework as much as possible.i also want to visit some of my friends and relatives. i’m sure i will have a pleasant time this summer.
a trip
i went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. it was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way. one of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any further. nobody knew what to do. one girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area. luckily we brought a tent with us. we put it up and let him rest in it. he took some medicine. then he drank some water and ate some food. after a while,he felt much better and we walked on. we all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.
a football game
yeserday we had a football game against the team from class four. their players were good. we really felt a little afraid of
them. but zhang xin,the leader of our class team,said,“although they are good players,their team is weak.”zhang xin is about 1.68 meters tall and his number is twelve. he can kick two or three goals every match. then he told us,“remember that we are a team and we’ll win the game.”
at the beginning of the match,a player from class four ran with the ball. zhang xin ran over quickly to stop him. he got the ball and kicked the goal! he kept on passing the ball to other players. we passed the ball to each other like him. the players from class four were getting anxious. they were angry with us. but we continued to pass the ball.
at last we kicked four goals and they kicked two. we won the game! we were very happy.
a wom ……此处隐藏6811个字……即《延河》)上刚刚发表过两个短篇小说,都是注释演绎“阶级斗争”这个“纲”的,而且是被认为演绎注释得不错的。接待的人员组成考虑到方方面面,大学革委会主任、革命演员、革命工程师等,我也算革命的工农兵业余作者。陕西最具影响的几位作家几棵大树都被整垮了,我怎么也清楚我是猴子称王的被列入??
最紧迫的事便是衣服问题。我身上穿的和包袱里包的外衣和衬衣,几乎找不到一件不打补丁的,连袜子也不例外。我那时工资39元,连我在内养活着一个五口之家,添一件新衣服大约两年才能做到。为接待外宾而添一件新衣造成家庭经济的失衡,太划不来了。我很快拿定主意,借。
借衣服的对象第一个便瞄准了李旭升。他和我同龄,个头高低身材粗细也都差不多。他的人样俊气且不论,平时穿戴比较讲究,我几乎没见过他衣帽邋遢的时候。他的衣服质料也总是高一档,应该说他的衣着代表着70年代中期我们那个公社地区的最高水平。“四清”运动时,工作组对他在经济问题上的怀疑首先是由他的穿着诱发的,不贪污公款怎么能穿这么阔气的衣服?我借了一件半新的上装和裤子,虽然有点褪色却很平整,大约是哔叽料吧我已记不清了。衬衣没有借,我的衬衣上的补丁是看不见的。
我带着这一套行头回到驻队的村子。我的三个组员(工作组)经过一番认真地审查,还是觉得太旧了点,而且再三说我这不是个人问题,是一个“政治影响”问题,影响国家声誉的问题??其中一位老大姐第二天从家里带来了她丈夫的一套黄呢军装,硬要我穿上试试。结果连她自己也失望地摇头了,因为那套属于将军或校官的黄呢军装整个把我装饰得面目全非了,或者是我的老百姓的涣散气性把这套军装搞得不伦不类了。我最后只选用了她丈夫的一双皮鞋,稍微小了点但可以凑合。
第二天中午搭郊区公共车进西安,先到作家协会等候指令。《陕西文艺》副主编贺抒玉见了,又是从头到脚的一番审视,和我的那三位工作组员英雄所见一致:太旧。我没有好意思说透,就这旧衣服还是借来的。她也提醒我不能马虎穿戴,这不是个人问题而是“国家影响政治影响”的大事。我从那时候直到现在都为这一点感动,大家都首先考虑国家面子。老贺随即从家里取来李若冰的蓝呢上衣,我换上以后倒很合身。老贺说很好,其他几位编辑都说好,说我整个儿都气派了。
接待的事已经淡忘模糊了,外宾是些什么人也早已忘记,只记得有一位女作家,中年人,大约长我十岁。我第一眼瞧见她首先看见的是那红嘴唇。她挨我坐着,我总是由不得看她的红嘴唇,那么红啊!我竟然暗暗替她操心,如果她单个走在街上,会不会被红卫兵逮住像剪烫发砍高跟鞋一样把她的红嘴唇给割了削了?
那顿晚餐散席之后我累极了,比学大寨拉车挑担还累。
现在,因为工作的关系我常常接待外宾并作陪吃饭,自然不再为一件衣服而慌乱奔走告借了;再说,国家的面子也不需要一个公民靠借来的衣服去撑持了;还有,我也不会为那位日本女作家的红嘴被割削而操心担忧了,因为中国城市女人的红嘴唇已经灿若云霞红如海洋了。
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朴实的语言叙述了一件特殊的年代经历的特殊的事,作家的叙述是诙谐幽默的,但其中又夹杂着些许无奈。全文围绕见外宾时穿什么衣服组织材料,由自己穷困没有合适衣服,到向人借,到别人热情地拿来衣服??层层叠叠,似乎絮絮叨叨,读来却饶有兴味。值得注意的是文章内容似乎与题目不太切合,题目为《最初的晚餐》,文章却没有详写晚餐的情况,只写了一位女作家的红唇。这就是作家行文的艺术,晚餐吃什么饭,见什么人,确实不重要,但一切的准备工作都是围绕“晚餐”展开,女作家的红唇也是那个年代令人关注的。这,就是对材料的取舍。
星期一早晨的奇迹
【美】帕特·维格安
我登上南去的151号公共汽车时,太阳正朗照天空。但是,冬天的芝加哥正处于最没生气的季节——树枝枯干、稀泥满地,来往的车辆上溅满了泥水。
车子行进了数英里,经过风景秀丽的林肯公园,但是,没有人抬头去看窗外。乘客们都穿得笨重如牛,在单调乏味的引擎声和窒息燥热的空气中无声静坐着。
没有人说话——这是芝加哥人坐车来往时一条不成文的规矩。尽管我们每天都碰见同样的面孔,但我们都习惯于把自己藏在报纸的背后。此举包含的象征意义令人吃惊:紧挨而坐的比邻硬用那一张张薄纸,在彼此间制造了天涯。
汽车进入“繁华一英里”地区,五光十色的摩天楼群沿密执安大街拔地而起,突然,一个声音打破了沉静:“注意啦!注意啦!”
报纸哗哗响着,大家都伸长了脖子。
“这是你们的司机在说话。”
沉默。大家都看着司机的后脑勺,他的声音充满了威严:
“放下你们的报纸,各位乘客。”
所有的报纸都在慢慢地放下,司机在等待着。最后,报纸都折好了,搁在我们腿上。“好,转过身去面对你的邻座,开始。”
惊奇之中,我们都照着做了。仍然没有人笑。我们只是盲目地服从,这是人的本能起着作用。
我面对的是一位老妇人,她的头紧紧地裹在一块红头巾里,我几乎每天都见到她。我俩目光碰到了一起,我们都一眼不眨地等待着,等待司机的下一道指令。
“现在,跟着我说??”这是一道命令,一道以一个军事操练官的语气发布的命令:“早上好,邻座!”
我们的声音都很轻微,有点腼腆。对我们很多人来说,这是今天所说的第一句话。然而,像中学生那样,我们是整齐一致地对邻座的陌生人说了这句话。
我们都为自己笑了起来,都不由自主地笑了。这当中有一时的轻松,因为我们没有遭到绑架或者抢劫。然而更多的是,我们为自己表露了一种长期受抑的寻常礼貌之情而感到朦胧的宽慰。我们已经说出这句话,路障已经清除了。“早上好,邻座!”其实,这并不太难。我们有些人重复着它,其他人在握着手,很多人则笑着。
汽车司机没有再说什么。他已不用多说,没有人重新拿起报纸,车内洋溢着欢声笑语。从对这位发了疯的司机点头赞许开始,我们起步了。这位司机引出了全新的坐车故事。我听到了欢笑,一种在151号车上从未听到过的温暖悦耳的欢笑。
到站了,我对邻座说声再见,然后跳下车。另有四辆公共汽车在同站停车和下客。我看到那些留在车内的乘客都如同一尊尊雕像——木然不动、毫无声息。只有我那辆车上的人们除外。151号车启动了,我微笑着目送那一张张生气勃勃的面孔。这一天的开始,真是好得不能再好了!
我回头看那位司机,他正紧盯着反光镜,在滚滚车流中探寻前进的道路。他似乎根本不知道,他刚创造了一个星期一早晨的奇迹。
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文章完全采用顺序的手法,形象真实地叙写了一件发生在星期一早晨公交车上的事——在司机的提议下,陌生人相互进行问候。一件看起来很小,但却是极有意义的事。因为,就是这么简单的一句问候,缩短了人与人之间的距离,给人的心灵以慰藉,让人感受到生活的美好,人与人沟通的重要。其实,生活中有很多值得写进文章的材料,虽然仅仅是一件似乎微不足道的小事,但稍微思考,就会发现其中的价值。文章的叙事简约而不简单,形象而不造作,其行文艺术很值得我们品味。
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